Reviews For Chamalla and Ambrosia
Name: jo_siris (Signed) · Date: Feb 16, 2008 09:30 PM · For: In The Night
I really like this.
looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Name: mulch11 (Signed) · Date: Feb 16, 2008 02:05 PM · For: In The Night
Wonderful story and very well written. Both chapters were so different but both very intense and very much in character. I can’t wait to read the rest of this story.
Name: SLN (Signed) · Date: Feb 16, 2008 12:31 PM · For: In The Night
A couple of very emotive chapters so far. You captured Laura's frustration and despair, Bill's desperation at her plight and the absolute horror of hallucinations fed by terrors both real and imagined.
These are two strong characters who have been pushed to breaking point repeatedly and who have extremely limited opportunities to come to terms with everything that happens to them. This is wonderful portrayal of two people on the edge who need other perhaps even more than they realise.
I look forward to seeing how you finish this great story.
Thank you
Name: caramelapples (Signed) · Date: Feb 16, 2008 11:46 AM · For: In The Night
Oooh boy, that was intense. Marvellous job! :D:D:D